I find his written speech rather pedantic...
I appreciate your note. You're probably correct regarding pedantic.
I'm a tactician by trade, not a writer, so I may fall short in some places.
I hope that, even though my writing is a bit pedantic, that the content that I'm providing is achieving the goal of educating personnel on topics that I am familiar with. In fact, I started a new thread titled, "The End Of The World As We Know It." You may find it interesting. You may view it here: https://www.texasguntalk.com/thread...e-know-it-–-introduction.106734/#post-2384112
Please review it. If it needs some editing to improve its content, please let me know. I would be grateful.
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